PSY is having a hard time with his dance moves. He usually starts with a routine with x number of steps 7 times. He takes 8 steps out of the total routine. He realizes if he triples the number of steps it will fill most of the song. However his dance coach wants him to have four different routines with equal amount of steps. He ends up with 25.5 steps and on the half steps he does a quick transition to the next routine. 
1) Does the story fit with the equation? Is it functional? Would you actually write this equation from this word story problem? This story fit well with the equation. It is functional. I would actually write this equation from this word story problem because the story is very fun and the problem is great, too. 2) Does it make sense, or is it a little confusing? Discuss what is not clear, and suggest improvements. It is not very confusing, but I believe there could be a little more details to make it clear. 3) Are there any grammatical mistakes? How should they be corrected? There aren't any grammatical mistakes. They could add a bit more words to make this extraordinary. 4) Is the story creative? How could it be made better? This story is creative because it uses the one-of-a-kind guy, PSY. As always it could be better by adding more words and details. 5) What are the positive points about the word problem? The positive points about the word problem are the interesting characters and the problem itself.
PSY is to go on a tour ,starting in Korea, performing at many universal landmarks. From the sign on Hollywood, in-front of the Eiffel Tower, on top of Mount Rushmore and even in the Sydney Opera House! However, PSY is having a hard time with his dance moves. He usually starts with a routine with x number of horse steps 7 times. He takes 8 steps out of the total routine. He realizes if he triples the number of steps it will fill most of the song, so he does just that! However his dance coach wants him to have four different routines with equal amount of steps. He ends up with 25.5 steps and on the half steps he does a quick transition to the next routine. How many steps did he do for each of his 7 transitions when he first made his dance?
ReplyDeletePSY is having a hard time with his dance moves. He usually starts with a routine with x number of steps 7 times. He takes 8 steps out of the total routine. He realizes if he triples the number of steps it will fill most of the song. However his dance coach wants him to have four different routines with equal amount of steps. He ends up with 25.5 steps and on the half steps he does a quick transition to the next routine. 
The equation was overall really good and we liked it, it was creative and it made sense. so overall good job :DDDD
DeleteBut you don't have a question at the end so like the question should be like: how many steps did PSY do in each different routine?
Deleteyou should specify after taking out the 8 steps then triples them
Delete1) Does the story fit with the equation? Is it functional? Would you actually write this equation from this word story problem?
ReplyDeleteThis story fit well with the equation. It is functional. I would actually write this equation from this word story problem because the story is very fun and the problem is great, too.
2) Does it make sense, or is it a little confusing? Discuss what is not clear, and suggest improvements.
It is not very confusing, but I believe there could be a little more details to make it clear.
3) Are there any grammatical mistakes? How should they be corrected?
There aren't any grammatical mistakes. They could add a bit more words to make this extraordinary.
4) Is the story creative? How could it be made better?
This story is creative because it uses the one-of-a-kind guy, PSY. As always it could be better by adding more words and details.
5) What are the positive points about the word problem?
The positive points about the word problem are the interesting characters and the problem itself.
PSY is to go on a tour ,starting in Korea, performing at many universal landmarks. From the sign on Hollywood, in-front of the Eiffel Tower, on top of Mount Rushmore and even in the Sydney Opera House! However, PSY is having a hard time with his dance moves. He usually starts with a routine with x number of horse steps 7 times. He takes 8 steps out of the total routine. He realizes if he triples the number of steps it will fill most of the song, so he does just that! However his dance coach wants him to have four different routines with equal amount of steps. He ends up with 25.5 steps and on the half steps he does a quick transition to the next routine. How many steps did he do for each of his 7 transitions when he first made his dance?
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