Draven had y number of axes in his weapon garage where he kept his collection of axes. Then Darius, Draven’s brother came in and took half of the total amount of axes that he has in his collection. As draven went in search of where his brother went a wild Teemo who was in stealth next to the collection of draven’s axes stole 7 of draven’s axes. If draven now has 10 axes how many axes did he have before Darius and teemo stole his axes.
The story fits the equation and it is functional, and I would write this equation when I see the problem. There is no problem in the word problem, and has no grammatical mistakes, the story is creative, because it is based on game characters, but people who don't know games might not understand, so you should change the names. The positive point is that it is creative and the character names are interesting.
This is a very accurate story. The story matches the equation and is functional. It is a very creative story. However, there may be a couple mistakes. You did not capitalize the name Draven twice. We do agree with Kevin and Grace though, some might not know what the characters are, so you might want to add something like "In the land of League of Legends" or something to clear any confusion. This is a very good story and the positive point is that the equation is demonstrated ina creative, lively wasy. Good work.
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The story fits the equation and it is functional, and I would write this equation when I see the problem. There is no problem in the word problem, and has no grammatical mistakes, the story is creative, because it is based on game characters, but people who don't know games might not understand, so you should change the names. The positive point is that it is creative and the character names are interesting.
ReplyDeleteThis is a very accurate story. The story matches the equation and is functional. It is a very creative story. However, there may be a couple mistakes. You did not capitalize the name Draven twice. We do agree with Kevin and Grace though, some might not know what the characters are, so you might want to add something like "In the land of League of Legends" or something to clear any confusion. This is a very good story and the positive point is that the equation is demonstrated ina creative, lively wasy. Good work.
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