Garfield gets a certain amount of lbs of lasagna for 2 days, which is christmas eve and christmas day. He gets it for 3 years straight. Then he gives 15lbs of lasagnas to his teddy bear. Then, there was 39lbs of lasagnas left. How many lbs of lasagna did Garfield get for 2 days?
Yes the story fits the equation. We can write the equation from the word problem. As Jeremy and AK said, the “two days, which is Christmas and Christmas eve” was kind of confusing. We also think lbs should be changed to pounds because it is kind of hard to read. The story is creative. As they said, lasagna doesn’t have a plural form, so you should correct that as well. We like the characters and the interesting plot. You should change teddy bear to the puppy, the friend of Garfield. The word problem suits the equation very well.
The story was suitable for the equation and made sense. I think it would've been more easier if you didn't put "for 2 days, which is christmas eve and christmas day." (I think it's There were 39lbs of lasagnas left.
The story fits the equation well and it is functional. It makes sense, however I think you should change the "2 days" to "Christmas Eve and Christmas Day". Lasagnas doesn't have a plural form, so change it to just lasagna. Instead of lbs I think pounds will be more better because it is more formal and easier to comprehend. It is just great creative, but if you change these mistakes it will be awesome.
NEW VERSION: Garfield gets a certain amount of pounds of lasagna for Christmas Eve and Christmas Day. He gets it for 3 years straight. Then he gives 15 pounds of lasagna to Odie. Then, there were 39 pounds of lasagna left. How many pounds of lasagna did Garfield get for Christmas Eve and Christmas day?
Garfield gets a certain amount of lbs of lasagna for 2 days, which is christmas eve and christmas day. He gets it for 3 years straight. Then he gives 15lbs of lasagnas to his teddy bear. Then, there was 39lbs of lasagnas left. How many lbs of lasagna did Garfield get for 2 days?
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Yes the story fits the equation. We can write the equation from the word problem. As Jeremy and AK said, the “two days, which is Christmas and Christmas eve” was kind of confusing. We also think lbs should be changed to pounds because it is kind of hard to read. The story is creative. As they said, lasagna doesn’t have a plural form, so you should correct that as well. We like the characters and the interesting plot. You should change teddy bear to the puppy, the friend of Garfield. The word problem suits the equation very well.
DeleteThe story was suitable for the equation and made sense. I think it would've been more easier if you didn't put "for 2 days, which is christmas eve and christmas day."
Delete(I think it's There were 39lbs of lasagnas left.
The story fits the equation well and it is functional. It makes sense, however I think you should change the "2 days" to "Christmas Eve and Christmas Day". Lasagnas doesn't have a plural form, so change it to just lasagna. Instead of lbs I think pounds will be more better because it is more formal and easier to comprehend. It is just great creative, but if you change these mistakes it will be awesome.
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ReplyDeleteGarfield gets a certain amount of pounds of lasagna for Christmas Eve and Christmas Day. He gets it for 3 years straight. Then he gives 15 pounds of lasagna to Odie. Then, there were 39 pounds of lasagna left. How many pounds of lasagna did Garfield get for Christmas Eve and Christmas day?