Psy was cooking after his world tour. He cooked stew. He invited some friends, and they each ate 3/4 bowl of stew. Psy himself ate one bowl of stew, admiring his work. They ate 7 bowls in total. How many friends did he invite?
The word problem was clear and it suited the equation. Yes, we would write this equation out of the word problem. It makes sense, but it can be better by including more details. There are no grammatical mistakes, but there were some chopped sentences, maybe add a transition verb and connect the sentences. The story was pretty creative, but it will be better with more detail. We like Psy as the character and it is easy to comprehend.
I think that it was very creative. We liked the story and it matches the equation very well. However we think that you could smoothen out your sentences and also you might have to lengthen the story and add some more parts.
The story fits very well with the equation and is also functional. I think I would write this equation from this story problem because it is easy to understand and is also simple and clear! At first, it was a little confusing, but after we set up an equation, it made sense. The part that was kind of not clear, was when they said “He invited some friends, and they each ate 3/4 bowl of stew” because we thought “they” was including PSY. It could be more creative, however, everything was perfect other than that! We don’t think there were any grammatical mistakes because all of the sentences were smooth and easy to understand. The story is fairly creative because it involves a strong character. We liked the part when they put the ‘stew’ because it helped us understand better. The positive point and most important thing is that the story is clear and easy to understand!
Psy was cooking after his world tour. He cooked stew. He invited some friends, and they each ate 3/4 bowl of stew. Psy himself ate one bowl of stew, admiring his work. They ate 7 bowls in total. How many friends did he invite?
ReplyDeleteThe word problem was clear and it suited the equation. Yes, we would write this equation out of the word problem. It makes sense, but it can be better by including more details. There are no grammatical mistakes, but there were some chopped sentences, maybe add a transition verb and connect the sentences. The story was pretty creative, but it will be better with more detail. We like Psy as the character and it is easy to comprehend.
DeleteI think that it was very creative. We liked the story and it matches the equation very well. However we think that you could smoothen out your sentences and also you might have to lengthen the story and add some more parts.
ReplyDeleteThe story fits very well with the equation and is also functional. I think I would write this equation from this story problem because it is easy to understand and is also simple and clear! At first, it was a little confusing, but after we set up an equation, it made sense. The part that was kind of not clear, was when they said “He invited some friends, and they each ate 3/4 bowl of stew” because we thought “they” was including PSY. It could be more creative, however, everything was perfect other than that! We don’t think there were any grammatical mistakes because all of the sentences were smooth and easy to understand. The story is fairly creative because it involves a strong character. We liked the part when they put the ‘stew’ because it helped us understand better. The positive point and most important thing is that the story is clear and easy to understand!
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