Dancing squirrel Cheesesticks is gathering acorns for the winter. Cheesesticks gathers x amount of acorns, and a very small chinese man gives cheesesticks 2 acorns for dancing. This happens repeatedly for 3 years, and Cheesesticks realize that he had gathered 24 acorns in 3 years. How much does he gather per year by cheesestick, himself?
The name is very confusing, so change the name, because it seems like a food. Also if you are going to use the name Cheesesticks, put a comma after Dancing squirrel in the first sentence. The word problem was clear and it did fit the equation, so good job!
We think it would be better that if you wrote certain amount of acorn instead of “x amount of acorns” The story makes sense and it is clear on what you are trying today. The story is very creative because you used “Dancing Squirrel Cheesestick) We liked it because the idea where a squirrel dance and get acorn from a little Chinese Man. And, also put a comma after “Dancing squirrel” because Cheesestick sound likes a cracker name. (Grammatical mistake) I like the fact that it’s very clear and straight-forward. Great job!!
The name Cheesesticks is very confusing, so change the name, because it seems like a food. Also if you are going to use the name Cheesesticks, put a comma after Dancing squirrel in the first sentence. Other than that, it makes sense, was clear, and it did fit the equation. Also it was very amusing to talk about a dancing squirrel, so good job!
The name Cheesesticks is very confusing, so change the name, because it seems like a food. Also if you are going to use the name Cheesesticks, put a comma after Dancing squirrel in the first sentence. There is grammatical mistake which you have to change the numbers into verbal expression. (ex: 3 --> three) Lastly you should tell that Cheesestick danced and got 2 acorns from the chinese man for once a year if it is. Other than that, it makes sense, it was clear, and it did fit the equation. Also it was very amusing to talk about a dancing squirrel, so good job!
You should tell how many days the Chinese man gives cheesesticks acorns. The most annoying thing is that the name is so confusing and there are some grammar and capitalization mistakes. Like you wrote cheesestick not cheesesticks. Maybe you should explain more descriptively. Also it is too plain and maybe Chinese man should have a proper name.
The Dancing Squirrel is gathering acorns for the winter. He gathered x amount of acorns, until a very small anonymous chinese man donated 2 more acorns per day for dancing to the dancing squirrel. This happens for 3 days, and the Dancing Squirrel realized that he had gathered 24 acorns in 3 days. How much did Dancing Squirrel gather for himself? (Not the amount that Chinese man gave to him)
Dancing squirrel Cheesesticks is gathering acorns for the winter. Cheesesticks gathers x amount of acorns, and a very small chinese man gives cheesesticks 2 acorns for dancing. This happens repeatedly for 3 years, and Cheesesticks realize that he had gathered 24 acorns in 3 years. How much does he gather per year by cheesestick, himself?
ReplyDeleteThe name is very confusing, so change the name, because it seems like a food.
DeleteAlso if you are going to use the name Cheesesticks, put a comma after Dancing squirrel in the first sentence.
The word problem was clear and it did fit the equation, so good job!
We think it would be better that if you wrote certain amount of acorn instead of “x amount of acorns”
DeleteThe story makes sense and it is clear on what you are trying today. The story is very creative because you used “Dancing Squirrel Cheesestick)
We liked it because the idea where a squirrel dance and get acorn from a little Chinese Man.
And, also put a comma after “Dancing squirrel” because Cheesestick sound likes a cracker name. (Grammatical mistake)
I like the fact that it’s very clear and straight-forward.
Great job!!
The name Cheesesticks is very confusing, so change the name, because it seems like a food.
DeleteAlso if you are going to use the name Cheesesticks, put a comma after Dancing squirrel in the first sentence.
Other than that, it makes sense, was clear, and it did fit the equation. Also it was very amusing to talk about a dancing squirrel, so good job!
The name Cheesesticks is very confusing, so change the name, because it seems like a food.
DeleteAlso if you are going to use the name Cheesesticks, put a comma after Dancing squirrel in the first sentence.
There is grammatical mistake which you have to change the numbers into verbal expression. (ex: 3 --> three)
Lastly you should tell that Cheesestick danced and got 2 acorns from the chinese man for once a year if it is.
Other than that, it makes sense, it was clear, and it did fit the equation. Also it was very amusing to talk about a dancing squirrel, so good job!
You should tell how many days the Chinese man gives cheesesticks acorns. The most annoying thing is that the name is so confusing and there are some grammar and capitalization mistakes. Like you wrote cheesestick not cheesesticks. Maybe you should explain more descriptively. Also it is too plain and maybe Chinese man should have a proper name.
ReplyDeleteThe Dancing Squirrel is gathering acorns for the winter. He gathered x amount of acorns, until a very small anonymous chinese man donated 2 more acorns per day for dancing to the dancing squirrel. This happens for 3 days, and the Dancing Squirrel realized that he had gathered 24 acorns in 3 days. How much did Dancing Squirrel gather for himself? (Not the amount that Chinese man gave to him)
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